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"Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. (Haiku) by Bachus

The poor waitor's stare. Making love to my shell fish. Moist crotchless napkin. Butter & Lemons. The squirt of hot cocktail sauce. A wafer thin mint.

Robert K Foster 10-Jun-03/9:47 AM
No I couldn't eat another bite. oh sir, it is only a wafer thin mint. it's wafer thein, oh, all right. munch grumble stretch BOOM!




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