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Beam reach (Ode) by INTRANSIT
I, the Captain, this vessel my maiden,
chased away from the land of the sun.
I hoist my mainsail, spirit unladen
knowing full well this voyage, begun.
I lead, she follows, to futures unknown.
I tension the lines to grace her with speed,
while thoughts filter through trails of white foam,
the spindrift rises and settles to bead.
Our dance, a sway, to the beat of the waves
cutting our course with the wind and her gusts.
Daylight is passing, we cross unseen graves
dashing past death with a mutual trust.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10052
Posted: June 9, 2003 6:17 AM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2003 8:39 AM PDT
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