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Beam reach (Ode) by INTRANSIT

I, the Captain, this vessel my maiden, chased away from the land of the sun. I hoist my mainsail, spirit unladen knowing full well this voyage, begun. I lead, she follows, to futures unknown. I tension the lines to grace her with speed, while thoughts filter through trails of white foam, the spindrift rises and settles to bead. Our dance, a sway, to the beat of the waves cutting our course with the wind and her gusts. Daylight is passing, we cross unseen graves dashing past death with a mutual trust.

INTRANSIT 9-Jun-03/4:09 PM
Narrarator: You see, INTRANSIT, new to sailing, was thinking "upwind tack" when the order was given, thereby allowing the wind to catch him unawares. This in turn, caused his "deck shoes", wet from an previous unpleasantry, to *squelch* and ungrip themselves, sending INTRANSIT to feed the prawnes.




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