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Im Sorry (Lyric) by LosT SykoPath
It's like the hardest thing for me to do. I'm saying that im done with you. I found someone that I love, and I know he loves me back. With him I know that he knows me, with you, you dont know jack. When i really needed you, you were never around. So i looked for someone that would help, and that's just who i found. He was always there to hold me tight. Always there to kiss me good night. Always there to make me laugh. Always there to light my path. In such a short time he became more to me. Seemed he was so much better than you could ever be. When you had asked if I still loved you. Of course I do, I will always love you. It's just, the thing we had is now nothing. It feels as if we never had anything. Now I think that we should just be friends, 'Cause all this just needs to come to an end.

Up the ladder: Vengeance Lost
Down the ladder: Crowning Achievement

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9049
Posted: June 11, 2003 8:16 AM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2003 8:16 AM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Jun-03/11:58 AM | Reply
Good god you are a fucking spinner.
[n/a] LosT SykoPath @ 12.242.211.218 > horus8 | 11-Jun-03/5:46 PM | Reply
what the hell do you mean?
[5] Robert K Foster @ 66.66.214.253 | 11-Jun-03/3:55 PM | Reply
The line that captivated me was "with you, you dont know jack". It's just so pure.
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