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one grey dream (Free verse) by crwncka1
once i slept in an old withered meadow
where once grew of nothing but lush green clover
for now just be one grey dried up sea of mesh
this is where i dreamed of in the fog that one grey morning
whist lying on the old grey withered sod
of a different place, of a different landscape, of a different scenery
a place where the sun always shined bright as can be
a place where the landscape was seemly forever colored
in the most radiant, vibrant, colors from seemly the whole spectrum
with the scenery full of life; birds, bees, and the like
forever dancing across the landscape, radiantly
to this place i know somewhere close to heaven
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7395
Posted: June 7, 2003 12:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2003 12:44 PM PDT
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