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The Mcdonald Haikus (Free verse) by scitz Joey took my order,
And read it back to me twice,
I only wanted fries.
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I asked for fries,
Joey forgot the brown sauce,
But not his metal smile.
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The fries were so hot,
But when i got a table,
they were stiff and cold.
Up the ladder:
one grey dream
Down the ladder:
Pretzel
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Posted: July 15, 2003 11:44 AM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2003 12:23 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0238404 Overall Rank: 7396 Comments:
A good idea disappointly executed
*disappointingly
enjoyed the first 2 haiku; the last one not as good
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second is 18
the third is right on, at 17