poemranker ::The Mcdonald Haikus by scitz

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 56409

The Mcdonald Haikus

by scitz

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2003 · Edited 16 Jul 2003 · 4 comments

Joey took my order, And read it back to me twice, I only wanted fries. ----------------------------------------------------- I asked for fries, Joey forgot the brown sauce, But not his metal smile. ----------------------------------------------------- The fries were so hot, But when i got a table, they were stiff and cold.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.20 weighted 5.02 rank 7388 views 177 View voting details →

5 votes so far. Yours would make 6.5 votes so far

4 comments

[n/a] horus8 16-Jul-03/1:59 PM Reply
First is 19

second is 18

the third is right on, at 17
[4] Terence 17-Jul-03/7:31 AM Reply
A good idea disappointly executed
[4] Terence › Terence 17-Jul-03/7:31 AM Reply
*disappointingly
[7] Jill Stockinger 27-Dec-20/3:48 PM Reply
enjoyed the first 2 haiku; the last one not as good