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The Mcdonald Haikus (Free verse) by scitz

Joey took my order, And read it back to me twice, I only wanted fries. ----------------------------------------------------- I asked for fries, Joey forgot the brown sauce, But not his metal smile. ----------------------------------------------------- The fries were so hot, But when i got a table, they were stiff and cold.

Jill Stockinger 27-Dec-20/3:48 PM
enjoyed the first 2 haiku; the last one not as good




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