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-none (Free verse) by LosT SykoPath
Blood slowly drips off his hands and onto the just used sciccors. He looks at his hand in agony. What an unbareab pain. His eyes puff up and a tear rolls down his cheek. That's when he starts to scream. It's ear shattering, like a gunshot, a pain like someone dying before your eyes! So the lady in the next room jumps up and races to the room. She quickly opens the door to see him standing there holding the sciccors high upin the air. Se spins aroudn and looks into her eyes. Then he stomps over to her and cries- -MOMMY I GOT A BOO BOO!

Up the ladder: This guy
Down the ladder: The Morning After

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12141
Posted: June 11, 2003 10:29 AM PDT; Last modified: June 11, 2003 10:29 AM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Jun-03/11:59 AM | Reply
lol.
[7] Robert K Foster @ 66.66.214.253 | 11-Jun-03/3:52 PM | Reply
what is "unbareab"?
cliche:"like a gunshot"

A lovely poem about a middle aged man with scissors. is it modeled after Boo Radley from To Kill a Mockingbird?
[n/a] LosT SykoPath @ 12.242.211.218 > Robert K Foster | 11-Jun-03/5:41 PM | Reply
sorry I didn't mean to write unbareab..I was in a hurry and I meant unbareable.
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