poemranker ::5 minutes by Jai

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Free verse № 52355

5 minutes

by Jai

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

If I had five minutes alone with you I would probally wanna rip your head off, but I wouldn't. If it was just us, I would be fine. I would tell you that I hated you and I didnt want to see you, that I dont even care. I'm over it and that you will never have the chance to be in my toughts again. If I hear your name I will hear it just like any other person. That would take 62 seconds. Then I'dwalk away cuz your not worth five minutes of my time, 62 seconds was plenty.

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3 comments

[n/a] horus8 11-Jun-03/11:48 AM Reply
You are a supreme ass boil.
[5] Robert K Foster › horus8 11-Jun-03/3:57 PM Reply
boy oh boy you are firing these off today! nice one.
[5] Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/3:58 PM Reply
It reminds me of an eminem song, only without the line breaks.