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5 minutes (Free verse) by Jai
If I had five minutes alone with you I would probally wanna rip your head off, but I wouldn't. If it was just us, I would be fine. I would tell you that I hated you and I didnt want to see you, that I dont even care. I'm over it and that you will never have the chance to be in my toughts again. If I hear your name I will hear it just like any other person. That would take 62 seconds. Then I'dwalk away cuz your not worth five minutes of my time, 62 seconds was plenty.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12361
Posted: June 10, 2003 4:55 PM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2003 4:55 PM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Jun-03/11:48 AM | Reply
You are a supreme ass boil.
[5] Robert K Foster @ 66.66.214.253 > horus8 | 11-Jun-03/3:57 PM | Reply
boy oh boy you are firing these off today! nice one.
[5] Robert K Foster @ 66.66.214.253 | 11-Jun-03/3:58 PM | Reply
It reminds me of an eminem song, only without the line breaks.
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