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cage (Free verse) by J-tweezy24
Wake up in the morn and what do I seeâ¦
Myself caged wanting to be freeâ¦
Itâs hard to get out of the steel based boxâ¦
Metals all cold on my feet, cuz I have on no soxâ¦
I wake everyday in the same placeâ¦
Wondering if ill ever feel the sun on my faceâ¦
Wanting to better myself but canât go anywhereâ¦
All I have is a mirror, at which I can stareâ¦
There is one way that I can get out of all thisâ¦
You can tell by all the slits on my wristâ¦
But thatâs not how I want things to turn outâ¦
I need faith so it can erase all my doubtâ¦
I feel weak in the knees from not moving muchâ¦
Moving my hands loosing the sense of touchâ¦
Hear nothing but myself breath in the cageâ¦
Silence makes me crazy; I feel a sudden rageâ¦
Not wanting to stay here, I want to get awayâ¦
No one to talk to so what can I sayâ¦
Looking at the place I rest and go to bedâ¦
A busted old blanket and rock for my headâ¦
But I will make it out some time, some dayâ¦
Faith in god will show me the right wayâ¦
Go each day knowing soon I will be freeâ¦
Out of this cage which imprisons me
BY:
TWEEZY
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12362
Posted: August 13, 2003 9:25 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2003 9:25 PM PDT
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