Re: save it from the age by abecedarian	30-Oct-02/5:41 PM
manly p. hall? the secret teachings of all ages...would eleviate that boards creak, or make it louder in time i think...i don't remember maybe both. you're getting lots of swell votes..take a look.B
Re: Poem Ranker by abecedarian	30-Oct-02/5:35 PM
unreal...ha! little bit of the slippered champagne i see. never, and i mean never let that cad diminish your toot...he lost an eye last week to a blow gunning pygmy so..see.. he's a bit blind and tempermental these days...some gay priest knocked all of the change out of his hand, and the morrison shrine in paris and called him a sharp tongued alter boy twice removed and..well...he hasn't been the same really..plus there's this thing with settle and d.a (they won't let him cook the eggo to even be able to leggo?) that he's got brewing on a ethereal level in his left buttocks..(on the down lo, that is) so here's a nine from us here at the foundaton. 9. <brought to you by 'pining nuts' more than just a snack....and 'bra snap' the only way to fly>
Re: The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~	30-Oct-02/5:25 PM
here's a diced date instead. with microwaved butter flavored poisoning, cheers!
Re: 25 mg by kiki	30-Oct-02/5:20 PM
well..well.quite the forester are we? here's wishing you luck with your nuts and berries of the future 10. lean is mean!
Re: a comment on more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	29-Oct-02/12:37 PM
obviously you've been varnishing mahogany at the private boys shavery again. i will pray for you and yours immediately. have fun with your squash before the seeds get salted. better let me borrow the elephant gun, another of our creations seems to have gotten out. maybe we need a higher fence? and fresh paint on the tree house.
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/2:50 PM
well i guess, i'm going to give up cussing now, and drink a glass of insta-mature(cuz i'm hurting all of the sensitive poets feelings, and so on "reala poetas" deserve more appropriate and positive criticism)...there.better. FUCK! burnt my tongue..umm.great layout yeah..tricky. clever. deep.yeah. p.s for those of you who need to know the real truth behind anothers feelings about your work, go fucking read it to your shrink or your priest, but don't expect to put fucking trash up in front of someone who takes poetry mucho serioso (like me and darkangle and lonedisco29.5, and not get bitch slapped) i hope i make you cry, and your dad and your boyfriend come And beat me up..cuz i'm fucken ready beeatch, and i got a set of tube steak glow in the dark helmets for the lot of you. whose your daddy now? oh nice poem. really 8.
Re: a comment on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles	28-Oct-02/1:39 PM
In the dank bathole, my pet st. bernard limps by. Robo-cujo. Queer? (Apologies...uh..pretty much to no one)
Re: Second Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29	28-Oct-02/10:15 AM
what do you think should happen to the bad guys, lone blee blah? i'm really that interested. fucking cads. trick candles? wow. that's genu-wine and prophetic. blee blee blah blah. congrats lonedisco29.5! you win the blee blah award for eternal bliss in blissania. enjoy your trip. and you frass, should be put down also with mohammed and the carribean pool boy..you just know deep down he was blowing the older one as the trigger got pulled...you just gotta know huh..yes. i know. they'll burn like 4th of july red devil stand fountains..there afros will compress and implode as their eyes deflate and their long thick black uncut penises do the zipper shine into forever...yes into forever.....yes..into foreverm as a a a trend.3.
Re: IMMIGRATION by ali	26-Oct-02/9:39 AM
a total fucking towel head..i recommend you go to gangbox.com and listen to little johnies jihad.mp3 and then the phoebe snow, for maximum quotable lip smacks...cuz right now your lingo isn't even quite bingo. g7. 0.
Re: Living Conditions by Christof	26-Oct-02/8:52 AM
i would of liked more, but i guess autumn is about waning. huh? 6. liked the cheeky clouds by the way. carry on. tonights my last night as captain von trapp. i think that calls for some filipino hookers and some speedballs in the back of an rv moving at a good fourty-five mph. heading east with a well paid driver (a sober black madagascrian of course) how long would it take me to get to sioux city, south dakota? stopping to pee every hour on the hour, (from hollywood) and to buy some teriyaki beef jerky...that's a nasty riddle..the winner gets a lifetime supply of salt and vinegar lays potato chips. good day
Re: Words Only of Love by loneshadow29	26-Oct-02/8:42 AM
nice gambit. you fail miserably. now over the shoulder with you!
Re: Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29	26-Oct-02/8:39 AM
(cherry spoons first attempt at attempting)life like a sandal/the soles protecting your feet/wish i were a snail?
Re: Rain Doesn't Seem to Stop by ThoughtfulSoul	26-Oct-02/8:35 AM
alright noah...but can you side stroke the suez canal?
Re: Drinker's Haiku by cacophony	26-Oct-02/8:33 AM
red also tends to get you good and smashed were you wake up with crapped pants and linoleum snoring..dreaming of marin county and boba fet. 6.
Re: wax by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/8:30 AM
lose the last line, cuz nobody really gives a fuck. unfortunately...plus it draws more interest thatta way otay. otay. 6.
Re: Pismo shack by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/8:26 AM
i would end it with, "the strangers part ways" but make it "the strangers ways part". very good though. i love pismo beach and went there once with my first girlfriend laura padilla and her stepfather and mother from bakersfield in a light blue dodge omni...we watched a greatwhite shark eating seals one afternon, while the sunset. we set. ironically we parted ways. sorry about te homeless bastard...he's probably better off..cable is expensive..these days.10.
Re: PHandAcid by New Life Drug	26-Oct-02/8:16 AM
bravo, but can you play twister nude with an eloctronic waffle iron. 9. carry on. i enjoyed your word misplacement quite a bit and the title hook in also.
Re: Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Oct-02/1:19 PM
the movie don juan with brando and depp gives a great definition of love,,try that
Re: Something in the way by nopal	22-Oct-02/10:58 PM
this is like rattle snake colonic.have no fear...none1 because your heart was a rubber chicken and his incredibly unharmed. wink, sink.
Re: Parallel by aperfecttool77	22-Oct-02/10:43 PM
you have no grasp of the haiku. it can be out of the 575 and less than and rearranged. and as for your lyric well...it's not..you fail. purposely, i would hope. and quite poorly. congratulations!