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Love (Lyric) by little_angel_maria
How many days must I wait, How many cold loveless nights, how many tears must I waist, for your love to come back. How many times must I say to myself you do care, How many nights must I wait for your love to come home, Left home with just a memory of your face, Life seems dead without you. How many days must I wait, must I wait for your love to come back.

Up the ladder: Tree
Down the ladder: Baby Turtle Hop

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5714285
Weighted score: 3.9556305
Overall Rank: 13404
Posted: October 3, 2002 11:57 AM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 11:57 AM PDT
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[3] Tyriana @ 192.197.141.78 | 15-Oct-02/2:04 PM | Reply
Typical. Sort of like Sleeping Beauty, waiting to be rescued. Find a better prince.
[0] limonade @ 207.179.133.8 | 20-Oct-02/8:01 PM | Reply
Waste. Not waist.
His love won't come back. He probably isn't worth it either. Don't you value yourself enough to live without him?
[n/a] little_angel_maria @ 213.1.189.80 > limonade | 21-Oct-02/7:00 AM | Reply
i do value myself its just that i really do love logan you know it's just really unfair:(
[0] limonade @ 198.164.201.41 > little_angel_maria | 23-Oct-02/12:34 PM | Reply
I know it seems unfair, kitten. But there are much better boys out there for you.
[n/a] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.79 > little_angel_maria | 23-Oct-02/12:37 PM | Reply
Who is logan, and who the fuck is Craig David? And why are you his girl when you really love logan. what is up with you!
[n/a] little_angel_maria @ 213.122.147.5 > poetandknowit | 23-Oct-02/2:10 PM | Reply
lol craig david is a singer and i really like him i thnk his music rocks here in england logan my ex lol
[4] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 22-Oct-02/5:14 AM | Reply
Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Oct-02/8:21 PM | Reply
this is priceless. 10. make love to my pickle swelled "lap snorkel"...could ya quick before..i really just find out your a litte fat gay jew from idaho...are there even any jews in idaho? priceless. 10! P.s together darling with my votes and counsel you take out babbit and god's wife from the best list...forever! whoooahhh..ah..ah. (pinkied cornered mouth) 10!10!
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.121 | 23-Oct-02/6:58 AM | Reply
Well ring-a-ding-ding, a crap-ass teenage love ramble from highschool bard and goddess of cyber-lovin' Maria. And it sucks as much as her other stuff? Watch me gasp in mock shock! 0.
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