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Love (Lyric) by little_angel_maria

How many days must I wait, How many cold loveless nights, how many tears must I waist, for your love to come back. How many times must I say to myself you do care, How many nights must I wait for your love to come home, Left home with just a memory of your face, Life seems dead without you. How many days must I wait, must I wait for your love to come back.

cleverdevice 22-Oct-02/5:14 AM
Quite average actually. No depth of character or history. Could be anything which in some cases is good, but here it's just vague.




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