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Baby Turtle Hop (Free verse) by ruella
Are there any baby turtles in the house? Stand on up, baby turtles! Let's do the Baby Turtle Hop! Ready? Small Hops! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop Hop! Hop Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop Hop! Hop Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop Hop! Hop Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! Hop! What good baby turtles! Now back into your shells, to rest!
Up the ladder: Love
Down the ladder: guilty mind
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.909091
Weighted score: 3.9545455
Overall Rank: 13405
Posted: May 28, 2002 10:23 AM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2002 10:23 AM PDT
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[0] deleted user @ 152.163.204.53 | 28-May-02/3:04 PM | Reply





tHIS IS BY FAR THE DUMBEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ, WAS THIS A JOKE OR ARE YOU SERIOUSLLY THAT DUMB?


[n/a] ruella @ | 29-May-02/12:13 AM | Reply
Your comments demonstrate that you don't have a gnack for finding success with (1) public reading, or (2) small children. *:) Stick around and learn something, Po-dog! RMB
[2] nentwined @ 66.47.71.146 | 29-May-02/3:04 AM | Reply
while this could probably be some sort of rap if filled with enough sexual energy for the music video, umm... didn't do much for me.
[3] Kriss @ 24.150.72.138 | 12-Aug-02/7:36 AM | Reply
I am unsure of the meaning of this poem.
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