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Drinker's Haiku (Haiku) by cacophony
The red stains my soul Perhaps I'll try white this time; It works on carpets
Up the ladder: Life's Unnoticables
Down the ladder: Navel Action
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.3133106
Overall Rank: 3579
Posted: October 25, 2002 4:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2002 4:46 AM PDT
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[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 25-Oct-02/6:19 AM | Reply
Not bad at all!
[7] Tintagiles @ 198.164.242.171 | 25-Oct-02/8:35 AM | Reply
All you have to do is put some salt on the red wine stains and they'll be easy to make dissapear. Really.
[7] New Life Drug @ 64.175.37.54 | 25-Oct-02/5:20 PM | Reply
ha
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.117.82 | 26-Oct-02/8:33 AM | Reply
red also tends to get you good and smashed were you wake up with crapped pants and linoleum snoring..dreaming of marin county and boba fet. 6.
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Dec-02/8:05 PM | Reply
reverse psykoolidgy.
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