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Life's Unnoticables (Free verse) by apples_tim
The stars, sky and the smell of dew things so small we endure How many times we overlook the finest gift of all? Worries, tears, fears of tomorrow troubled hearts with sorrow don't be sad, mad, or extreme because your life is for seen. Listen to the bluebirds sing their songs Savor the purity of the wind of all things that move your soul let this moment be forever yearned.. When the rain drops totter down to kiss your supple lips enjoy the power of distant passion for all of these are heaven sent.

Up the ladder: Who is it for anyway?
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.3133106
Overall Rank: 3578
Posted: September 26, 2002 8:55 PM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2002 8:55 PM PDT
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[5] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 27-Sep-02/2:45 AM | Reply
I don't understand what you mean by 'your life is for seen' - do you mean 'foreseen'?
[7] god'swife @ 209.179.213.52 | 27-Sep-02/10:42 AM | Reply
S2 is anemic, donate some time to it. Sweet, reminds me of A Child's Garden of Verse.
[4] rockinindividual @ 24.136.190.192 | 25-Jan-03/1:18 PM | Reply
forseen is one word
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