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Who is it for anyway? (Ode) by flatliner
Please excuse this at the start because I write not for art and to be honest, not for you but, in an attempt to be true, I am doing it only to take comfort in my life's mistake. Liking you may not be wrong loving you is why I write this song. I'm not singing this to be a hit but I'm playing at it just a bit and if you can get by it all the same know why our love remains untame, it's heated by all that we can't say ringing a tune that only we can play. Liking you may not be wrong loving you is why I write this song. All the friction and all the heat has made this thing less than sweet but now that it is done and gone loving you is why I write this song.

Up the ladder: pep talk
Down the ladder: Life's Unnoticables

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.3133106
Overall Rank: 3577
Posted: September 16, 2002 8:14 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 8:14 AM PDT
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[10] DreamMachine @ 66.212.78.246 | 16-Sep-02/11:11 AM | Reply
Wow! I find this one really meaningful cus I was just sucked into it's emotions!
[7] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 20-Sep-02/1:36 AM | Reply
If this is ironic, it's very funny - deconstructing empty culture.
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