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Hurt never dies (Free verse) by hobojo A slight drift
A suspicion
Confirmed
Upside down
Surrounded by calm
A feeling of distance
From all that's around
Years pass
The wind blows
An attempt
Smack
Pride or protection
Walk away
Things unsaid
Synoptic?
Up the ladder:
Love (pyramus and thisbe)
Down the ladder:
Flowers
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Posted: November 7, 2003 8:17 AM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2003 8:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.313765 Overall Rank: 3551 Comments:
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deleted user @ 169.244.70.148
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7-Nov-03/8:28 AM
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what do you mean "surrounded by calm"
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hobojo @ 166.94.223.99
> deleted user
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7-Nov-03/8:31 AM
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Surrounded by calm - when your world is in turmoil but the world goes on - the feeling when you can't function but all others do.
Synoptic? I bet.
I kept trying to figure if you have a bible reference in here (since you have synoptic) - but I gave up, sorry. Do you?
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