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Hurt never dies

by hobojo

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

A slight drift A suspicion Confirmed Upside down Surrounded by calm A feeling of distance From all that's around Years pass The wind blows An attempt Smack Pride or protection Walk away Things unsaid Synoptic?

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[8] deleted user 7-Nov-03/8:28 AM Reply
what do you mean "surrounded by calm"
[n/a] hobojo › deleted user 7-Nov-03/8:31 AM Reply
Surrounded by calm - when your world is in turmoil but the world goes on - the feeling when you can't function but all others do.
[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 7-Nov-03/10:27 PM Reply
Synoptic? I bet.
[7] Shuushin 8-Nov-03/6:09 AM Reply
I kept trying to figure if you have a bible reference in here (since you have synoptic) - but I gave up, sorry. Do you?

Searching for meaning (I've put in as much as can be expected).