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Hurt never dies (Free verse) by hobojo

A slight drift A suspicion Confirmed Upside down Surrounded by calm A feeling of distance From all that's around Years pass The wind blows An attempt Smack Pride or protection Walk away Things unsaid Synoptic?

hobojo 7-Nov-03/8:31 AM
Surrounded by calm - when your world is in turmoil but the world goes on - the feeling when you can't function but all others do.




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