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colour wheel

by calliope

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Nov 2003 · 4 comments

sometimes i feel like thin skin being pulled off a decaying pear. i feel discoloured, slightly rank and meticulously removed. but the still life i was once part of is a painting now, my skin is in fact chipping paint. either way, i'm rotting away and the elements are fingers in their own right.

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[n/a] deleted user 11-Nov-03/3:35 PM Reply
you can't pull the skin off a bear unless it is already dead
[6] horus8 11-Nov-03/10:24 PM Reply
"The elements are fingers in their own right"? Boy, you sured layed an egg there.
[n/a] calliope › horus8 12-Nov-03/10:01 AM Reply
is laying an egg good or bad?
[9] ShaNoN+960317485 12-Nov-03/6:27 AM Reply
Gud that u r going 2 be gone:o)