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Something in the way (Free verse) by nopal
Step by step, paw bye paw???
Carefully picking its way.
Looks up and licks its small fangs.
Yawns and bathes---
Tongue in, tongue out;
Calmly opening its claws
Licking in between, then yawning???
A bright pink tongue,
And those big---yellow???eyes.
Mellow: rubs against your leg
Begging for company,
And like a hipocrit---turns away.
Tender, mellow, sweet, loving,
Soft: you turn away:
Emptiness???.
I turn to those acid yellow eyes---
Soft black fur that tickles my tears,
Soft black fur
That tickles my chewed up heart.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.857143
Weighted score: 4.6926384
Overall Rank: 12039
Posted: September 30, 2002 11:47 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 11:47 AM PDT
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