poemranker ::Something in the way by nopal

DetailsThe poem, its numbers, and the conversation.

Free verse № 18083

Something in the way

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

Step by step, paw bye paw??? Carefully picking its way. Looks up and licks its small fangs. Yawns and bathes--- Tongue in, tongue out; Calmly opening its claws Licking in between, then yawning??? A bright pink tongue, And those big---yellow???eyes. Mellow: rubs against your leg Begging for company, And like a hipocrit---turns away. Tender, mellow, sweet, loving, Soft: you turn away: Emptiness???. I turn to those acid yellow eyes--- Soft black fur that tickles my tears, Soft black fur That tickles my chewed up heart.

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 3.86 weighted 4.69 rank 12021 views 110 View voting details →

7 votes so far. Yours would make 8.7 votes so far

1 comment

[2] horus8 22-Oct-02/10:58 PM Reply
this is like rattle snake colonic.have no fear...none1 because your heart was a rubber chicken and his incredibly unharmed. wink, sink.