poemranker ::IMMIGRATION by ali

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Free verse № 18689

IMMIGRATION

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

A stranger in a strange land; I was, awash in a sea of foriegness; I was. but a native now; I am, An admirer of this land; I am. And here, successful; I shall be, A conquerer of this land; I shall be, A victor of this life; I will be.

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[6] Service 3-Oct-02/9:51 PM Reply
nice pace
[0] horus8 26-Oct-02/9:39 AM Reply
a total fucking towel head..i recommend you go to gangbox.com and listen to little johnies jihad.mp3 and then the phoebe snow, for maximum quotable lip smacks...cuz right now your lingo isn't even quite bingo. g7. 0.