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IMMIGRATION (Free verse) by ali A stranger in a strange land;
I was,
awash in a sea of foriegness;
I was.
but a native now;
I am,
An admirer of this land;
I am.
And here, successful;
I shall be,
A conquerer of this land;
I shall be,
A victor of this life;
I will be.
Up the ladder:
Your Mama
Down the ladder:
the girl what gave scott the look
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Posted: October 3, 2002 6:36 PM PDT; Last modified: October 3, 2002 6:36 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.6363635 Overall Rank: 12404 Comments:
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nice pace
a total fucking towel head..i recommend you go to gangbox.com and listen to little johnies jihad.mp3 and then the phoebe snow, for maximum quotable lip smacks...cuz right now your lingo isn't even quite bingo. g7. 0.
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