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America

by little_angel_maria

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Oct 2002 · 33 comments

America oh America, haven't you suffered enough, why all this cruelty and pain, why all this hate. America oh America, haven't you suffered enough, all those innocent people dead, can't we all just get along. America oh America, haven't you suffered enough, why all this war, can't we just stop all this, how many more innocent people are gonna die next, Can't we all just get along, America oh America.

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33 comments

[10] Dariana 6-Oct-02/5:17 AM Reply
Touching.
[2] <~> 7-Oct-02/7:37 AM Reply
you should talk to doug soderstrom. he'd tell you why.
[9] Blade 10-Oct-02/2:27 AM Reply
Yo dont like those yankee b"^&??(!! good on ya!!

Watch your Back!
BLADE
[1] Tascobar 14-Oct-02/4:54 AM Reply
Sorry, but I just think this is childish pap. Poor structure, very wishy-washy, and very cliched. 1/10
[0] Tyriana 15-Oct-02/1:59 PM Reply
cliched. childish. stupid beyond belief.
[n/a] little_angel_maria › Tyriana 21-Oct-02/7:03 AM Reply
omg ........ sorryyy:(
[n/a] little_angel_maria › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/12:44 PM Reply
thanx hep cat but i thnk i wont right again you lot what is your problem i only came here to write you know, and all you guys do is be horrible we're supposed to help each other im sorry if i offended any of you i just realli like writting and expressing my emotions but im starting to think that i really do suck bye
[n/a] god'swife › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/12:48 PM Reply
We do more then be horrible, we're bloody honest and we try to be objective. Please, please, please seek some counselling for what happened to you. Don't fuck -up an entire decade of your life like I did. I wish you the best.
[n/a] little_angel_maria › god'swife 22-Oct-02/12:52 PM Reply
ok im sorry i was rude to y'all if you wanna say somehting aint right dont say i t suckes just tel me what i need to improve ok thank you oh and my parents dont believe in counseling they said i can heal by myself :) thanks anyways
[n/a] god'swife › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/12:56 PM Reply
YOU CAN'T. YOU CANNOT. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
[n/a] god'swife › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/12:59 PM Reply
On your own the only way you can work out hte trauma is by re-creating it! It's a fact. You are in a very fragile and dangerous state of mind. You need guidance getting through it. you should be talking with girls who have been through what you've been through. You don't need your parents approval, your 14 go to a support group on your own. Start there. Just do it once, to prove I'm wrong.
[n/a] little_angel_maria › god'swife 22-Oct-02/1:01 PM Reply
omg im a latina and we have different lieves:( my parents are overprotective im not laoud to go nowhere on my own only if its near my road :( and i dont have girl-friends i dont go to school no more
[n/a] god'swife › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/1:06 PM Reply
We need to talk, I'm going to e-mail you right now.
[2] <~> › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/1:10 PM Reply
maria, you need to go to school. it' your right, and your only way out. mrs.god is a latina. your worlds are not so different. listen to her. she is kind.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/1:11 PM Reply
http://www.personalproblemranker.com
[n/a] little_angel_maria › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-02/1:16 PM Reply
omg ok but i cant im not allowed
[n/a] god'swife › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-02/1:19 PM Reply
It which case, would maria rank at the top of the best or the worst list?
[n/a] little_angel_maria › god'swife 22-Oct-02/1:22 PM Reply
i now what you are all gona say the wprst :(
[n/a] little_angel_maria › god'swife 22-Oct-02/1:22 PM Reply
i know what you are all going to say i belong in the worst :(
[n/a] god'swife › little_angel_maria 22-Oct-02/1:29 PM Reply
Yes maria, I think your personal problem is the worst one here at poemranker so far, with the exclusion of -=Dark_Angel's=- ( does the 's come before or after your left-wing?) but at least yours has a solution.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › god'swife 22-Oct-02/1:36 PM Reply
After.
[n/a] god'swife › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-02/1:41 PM Reply
Sorry, I'll get it right next time. *<;o) I'm a winking clown with a big red nose!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › god'swife 22-Oct-02/1:55 PM Reply
What was your personal problem again?
[n/a] god'swife › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-02/2:11 PM Reply
*<;o) I am a winking clown with a big red nose!
[6] horus8 › god'swife 22-Oct-02/8:30 PM Reply
you people are exceptionally ill. and i would like to invite you all to personal special holiday function of mine later on this decade. i'm gonna attemt to but fuck myself. while reading your poetry in pig latin.
[n/a] Christof › little_angel_maria 23-Oct-02/7:27 AM Reply
Not only do you need to go to school, it is illegal for your parents to prevent you. If Social Services find out about this there could be trouble. Please try and sort this out. Not wanting to sacre you unduly, but the authorities don't look on this sort of thing kindly.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-02/12:58 PM Reply
If only those damn eye-racki communists were as wise as you. I think you have singlehandedly found a solution for world peace! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Oct-02/1:15 PM Reply
Anyway, what's all this BS about "oh America, haven't you suffered enough"? Have you forgotten that America is the wealthiest, most powerful, most priveleged country on the planet? USA! USA!
[n/a] razorgrin 23-Oct-02/7:05 AM Reply
A friend of mine butt-fucked himself once.
[n/a] Christof › razorgrin 23-Oct-02/7:22 AM Reply
You have talented friends.
[0] Bobjim 4-Jan-03/1:28 PM Reply
Sorry to ruin everybody's fun, But, AMERICA IS RESPONSIBLE FOR MOST OF THE FUCKUPS IN THE WORLD. THE TERRORISTS HATE YOU FOR A GOOD REASON. YOU DUMB FUCKS, NOT ONE AMERICAN IS INNOCENT, NO-ONE IS. YOU ARE JUDGED GUILTY, THE PENALTY IS DEATH. WITHIN 100 YEARS, EVERYONE WILL BE DEAD. FUCKERS.
[n/a] razorgrin 4-Jan-03/8:11 PM Reply
we'll all be dead sooner, if i have my way, jimmy-ma-bob. no human is innocent. wwww.churchofeuthanasia.com.
[6] horus8 18-Jan-03/5:21 PM Reply
No, not according to malthusian theorys.