poemranker ::love is true by -=??lilaznjen??=-

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Free verse № 3409

love is true

by -=??lilaznjen??=-

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Jul 2002 · 6 comments

love is true love is not hate let's all agree that we'll all find a mate.

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6 comments

[n/a] deleted user 12-Jul-02/8:13 AM Reply
facile, no depth
[3] x311 26-Jul-02/2:03 PM Reply
cute, but very short. I tend to see things like this as more just witty saying than actual poetry, but that's just me.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 26-Jul-02/2:19 PM Reply
Line 1: 'Love' is neither true nor false. It is not a propostition. Line 2: This doesn't tell us anything we don't already know. Its sole purpose is to rhyme with Line 4. This makes the poeme seem forced. Lines 3&4: These make people say 'cute' or 'witty'. I could understand this if they were so hilarious that they made up for the rest of the piece. Unfortunately they fail. You fail.
[0] horus8 26-Jul-02/2:58 PM Reply
okay i go poke
you take shit
how dare you make me
Analyze this. simple sewer skewer dies
[9] Mystictwilight 15-Sep-04/11:38 AM Reply
:)
[2] Edna Sweetlove 20-Sep-06/5:08 PM Reply
You appear to be ill.