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love is true (Free verse) by -=??lilaznjen??=-
love is true love is not hate let's all agree that we'll all find a mate.

Up the ladder: America
Down the ladder: Crazy with a Capital K

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.090909
Weighted score: 4.0454545
Overall Rank: 13344
Posted: July 8, 2002 2:06 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 2:06 PM PDT
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[n/a] deleted user @ 24.199.93.49 | 12-Jul-02/8:13 AM | Reply
facile, no depth
[3] x311 @ 63.227.192.5 | 26-Jul-02/2:03 PM | Reply
cute, but very short. I tend to see things like this as more just witty saying than actual poetry, but that's just me.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.149.1 | 26-Jul-02/2:19 PM | Reply
Line 1: 'Love' is neither true nor false. It is not a propostition. Line 2: This doesn't tell us anything we don't already know. Its sole purpose is to rhyme with Line 4. This makes the poeme seem forced. Lines 3&4: These make people say 'cute' or 'witty'. I could understand this if they were so hilarious that they made up for the rest of the piece. Unfortunately they fail. You fail.
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 26-Jul-02/2:58 PM | Reply
okay i go poke
you take shit
how dare you make me
Analyze this. simple sewer skewer dies
[9] Mystictwilight @ 152.163.100.65 | 15-Sep-04/11:38 AM | Reply
:)
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.255.61 | 20-Sep-06/5:08 PM | Reply
You appear to be ill.
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