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love is true (Free verse) by -=??lilaznjen??=- love is true
love is not hate
let's all agree that
we'll all find a mate.
Up the ladder:
America
Down the ladder:
Crazy with a Capital K
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.090909
Posted: July 8, 2002 2:06 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 2:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.0454545 Overall Rank: 13349 Comments:
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12-Jul-02/8:13 AM
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facile, no depth
cute, but very short. I tend to see things like this as more just witty saying than actual poetry, but that's just me.
Line 1: 'Love' is neither true nor false. It is not a propostition. Line 2: This doesn't tell us anything we don't already know. Its sole purpose is to rhyme with Line 4. This makes the poeme seem forced. Lines 3&4: These make people say 'cute' or 'witty'. I could understand this if they were so hilarious that they made up for the rest of the piece. Unfortunately they fail. You fail.
okay i go poke
you take shit how dare you make me Analyze this. simple sewer skewer dies
:)
You appear to be ill.
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