on Youth Fair by daniella
5 Nov 2002, 12:11 PM
i will keep this in mind when i go to my ten year reunion in a few months. lovely.
replying on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 12:03 PM
good, now we have something in common...because i fall into catatonic state upon reading even your first name requiring a sacrifice from my minions of a pillow cased midget and a crate of bananas in order to awake...you also should be pillow cased and pinatad. cock-robin wanker.
replying on Jerk ?? Circle by horus8
5 Nov 2002, 11:52 AM
you sir, must think it's pretty funny to consistently mock the immense pain and trama of this young mans life!...in time..i will have satasfaction. prepare! i am gathering my peasants and goats for battle.
on The Washing by strider1
4 Nov 2002, 9:50 PM
i would of enjoyed the coffee maker a bit more, as far as things getting shut off go....here's an 8. even though i really think you're a wretched shite. 8.
on the queen of carts by snacktime
4 Nov 2002, 9:43 PM
another splendid thrust...here's a seven.all bad girls deserve a seven unless you're a man..than your an eight for making me need your shaft that much more. 7.
on you are my concert by snacktime
4 Nov 2002, 9:41 PM
i'm giving this a nine, it's very good and interesting and all that alluring shite, but the structure needs some a bit more water tight integrity. 8.
replying on James Dean by horus8
4 Nov 2002, 12:06 AM
interestingly enough...none of it really matters now...does it...i've seen the ring...and jesu has moved back in with mother...i will be grendal again soon...very very soon. i will break the winded!
replying on Jerk ?? Circle by horus8
1 Nov 2002, 7:36 PM
father in prison my entire life...no mother...raised by grandmother in a trailor in hell (sunvalley,nv.)....had everything i've ever loved ripped away from me...different school each year of my life....copped a drug and alchohol habit that is as smart as i am and expensive....13 months in military prison as the appropriately convenient scapecoat...lived in 27 states...made a baby quicker than a steak(in some odd effort to recreate myself, cuz i was under the impression i was going to die, because i had such a nasty morphine habit one summer, at god's wife's house).....hustler (male prostitution) in the nasty, bombastic film industry of sollywood....have had all the people i cared about the most on all levels imaginable turn their backs on me......and somehow have found a balance and understanding behind it all, instead of letting all that stagnate...i have it working in my favor, and it's becoming nucleur to say the least....in short i'm cusping, and have been trained by the ultimate of circumstances....a piss poor childhood...can do wonders, and of course you need a good fucking robust chiseled super-man haircut, and a pinky up beer tilt...sad thing is that's maybe a third of it...stick around...the time is drawing near! siddhartha and acting saved my life, if i don't perform daily...i act out in unhealthy ways...so.i write alot and perform alot...slepp and eat very little....in short..i smoke the best pot on the planet...skunk #2!
on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot
31 Oct 2002, 2:56 AM
you kept my interest so...keep the eight. 8. do a series of these...they're damn good.8.l
on realities <from above their brilliance is short-lived> by royalflesh
31 Oct 2002, 2:50 AM
make it a brick mosaic, so you lose the double use of the word mud and fix the mispell, maybe violet to violent? the "vodka mumble" is quite quotably delicious and...than lose the last stanza entirely...good luck...and thanks for the vodka mumble..i will use it well..d
on before bethlehem by royalflesh
31 Oct 2002, 2:43 AM
stanza seven...line 6 "very"....that's brilliant...social security checks for the well manured...and perhaps a motor home trip to the four corners...10.
on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva
31 Oct 2002, 12:47 AM
change last line "like" her to "than" her...it would be great...have a nine also.. and it is prose, but so what....just list it next time as other.
replying on Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8
30 Oct 2002, 11:24 PM
i am now...graffically..unfortunately..still, nothing is worse then stepping in cold, or a warm puddle of puppy pee in a winter month back east.
replying on James Dean by horus8
30 Oct 2002, 11:14 PM
i thank you, graciously.
on the trite scifi plot by ~incarnate~
30 Oct 2002, 7:37 PM
and den? woody woodpecker hits a knot. denting his beak.
replying on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
30 Oct 2002, 5:54 PM
good point. i agree, plus it's just overall a master-piece, no pun intended..always a pleasure over coffee, and it made me pull my focus away from my joint just long enough to forget i had one..now it's stuck up my nose..thank god it had gone out...again. 10.n
on save it from the age by abecedarian
30 Oct 2002, 5:41 PM
manly p. hall? the secret teachings of all ages...would eleviate that boards creak, or make it louder in time i think...i don't remember maybe both. you're getting lots of swell votes..take a look.B
on Poem Ranker by abecedarian
30 Oct 2002, 5:35 PM
unreal...ha! little bit of the slippered champagne i see. never, and i mean never let that cad diminish your toot...he lost an eye last week to a blow gunning pygmy so..see.. he's a bit blind and tempermental these days...some gay priest knocked all of the change out of his hand, and the morrison shrine in paris and called him a sharp tongued alter boy twice removed and..well...he hasn't been the same really..plus there's this thing with settle and d.a (they won't let him cook the eggo to even be able to leggo?) that he's got brewing on a ethereal level in his left buttocks..(on the down lo, that is) so here's a nine from us here at the foundaton. 9. <brought to you by 'pining nuts' more than just a snack....and 'bra snap' the only way to fly>
on The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~
30 Oct 2002, 5:25 PM
here's a diced date instead. with microwaved butter flavored poisoning, cheers!