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The Washing (Free verse) by strider1
He articulates with opaque and vague phrases,
using complex words galvanised by blacksmiths like
wood and charcoal and flame,
however his arm has been broken
and whilst the city rocks itself to sleep,
he pours himself a long cool drink from antiquity,
he dons a life-jacket and wishes he was the sea and not some nameless
bar-fly in a ship called anytown,
anyplace, anywhere.
He dons the cloak of invisibility and flies,
to a place where strangers do not care to meet.
It is at this place, that he finds himself,
bidden to meet the frailties of his youth
whch he does and so he turns to the one
good woman in his life,
he hopes she remembered
to turn off the washing machine.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0555553
Weighted score: 4.1003466
Overall Rank: 13314
Posted: October 9, 2002 1:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2002 1:07 PM PDT
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