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The Washing (Free verse) by strider1
He articulates with opaque and vague phrases, using complex words galvanised by blacksmiths like wood and charcoal and flame, however his arm has been broken and whilst the city rocks itself to sleep, he pours himself a long cool drink from antiquity, he dons a life-jacket and wishes he was the sea and not some nameless bar-fly in a ship called anytown, anyplace, anywhere. He dons the cloak of invisibility and flies, to a place where strangers do not care to meet. It is at this place, that he finds himself, bidden to meet the frailties of his youth whch he does and so he turns to the one good woman in his life, he hopes she remembered to turn off the washing machine.

Up the ladder: Virgin Bride
Down the ladder: hatred

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0555553
Weighted score: 4.1003466
Overall Rank: 13309
Posted: October 9, 2002 1:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2002 1:07 PM PDT
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.223 | 9-Oct-02/1:39 PM | Reply
It is the return of Newbie and bigbigdog (aka ASTRO GLIDE), Turbo Tom and the many other names you thought up in your little room.
[n/a] JakeBike @ 167.206.181.179 | 9-Oct-02/1:42 PM | Reply
what a controlling fuck. washing machines turn themselves off.
[0] New Life Drug @ 64.175.39.248 | 9-Oct-02/6:24 PM | Reply
I'd like to know how YOU wash
[n/a] w~* ATHENA *~w @ 66.245.32.85 > New Life Drug | 9-Oct-02/11:24 PM | Reply
my question is, how does one TURN ON a washing machine... sidelong glances from behind the Tide box?

[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.213.168 | 4-Nov-02/9:35 PM | Reply
"Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery." Eh. Did you get a boner letting my words flow around in your head and blood and while your fingers typed them out onto the screen. I bet you did, boy, I bet you did.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Nov-02/9:50 PM | Reply
i would of enjoyed the coffee maker a bit more, as far as things getting shut off go....here's an 8. even though i really think you're a wretched shite. 8.
[4] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 18-Nov-02/2:58 AM | Reply
I think this is discrminiatory to all washing machines everywhere, will tumble driers be next? For gods sake is it that bad?
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