Re: No recalculations needed by Bachus	13-Nov-02/4:46 PM
it's because he wrote it when he was in his coyote face. lol! what a crock of shite...i mean overall it's fine and all..it rolls off of the tongue and is a bit predictable..it's quite old and has that fresh out of highschool "what do i do now" sort of immature smell. oh well. we all started somewhere, but i wont vote. just because that would be the most caddish move for me yet today..other than talking to myself. a
Re: me by spazzman15	13-Nov-02/12:40 PM
and also the title is pompous and it blows just a bit. sorry but it should be anything but "me" unless you want to come across as being a pretentious squidly....how about "liver spots" instead, ,or "toothache".
Re: me by spazzman15	13-Nov-02/12:37 PM
bullshit. 7/10 is what it deserves simply because 'if you sing it out loud' some of the timings are fucked man period...not that it's not great..symbolically and all that jazz..it just..well... it would throw a singer off, and get him/her crossing shit out and adding their own words and stuff (that should be avoided at all costs)...and that becomes a nightmare for everyone involved.7.
Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird	13-Nov-02/12:29 PM
jack the rippers tools of choice. a cock, a scalpel, and of course, the bone saw. piano string the neck? indeed. but above all it comes down to charisma for money and the woman in between....sugar wins the fly, but i sir, am a mantis. praying for you. have a six. good morning, and nice tie. christmas present? exactly.
Re: Bedside Angel by feathers68	12-Nov-02/1:16 PM
that isn't cat pee. it's the cat.
Re: Angers Blood! by feathers68	12-Nov-02/12:44 PM
ha!haha...this gets a 10 though..i'm sorry, but you are to fucking much. really. here. i'm gonna go wash my hands now and prepare for my pig shank stew.
Re: a comment on Stranger by feathers68	12-Nov-02/12:36 PM
you sir, are a liar...at my incredible rate of thinking and connecting secret invisible filaments to other more highly sensitive and even more secret invisible filaments..do you honestly think it would make a difference how much pot i smoked..maybe by the time your thirty i'll be as stupid as you are smart (we will have met half way) huh! HUH! WHAT WERE WE TALKING ABOUT AGAIN? ah yeah old poeople with dementia listen..karen is it? if you genuinely are taking care of old people and it's effecting you in a way reminiscent of a mid life crisis, and forcing you to write poetry about the experience...congradulations. if not. you will burn in hell, and i'll be the one to take you there. otherwise..i'm sorry forgive me, go back to your bed pan cleaning and i'll fricken send myself to hell.thankyou for being understanding, and not taking me too seriously, but i will have you know my grandmother raised me. i happen to love old people just as much as pot or sex or anything else important like drinking and making sure the sheep are safe...so. there. what were we talking about again..ah yeah..lunch time!e
Re: IF Now! by feathers68	12-Nov-02/12:18 PM
do you really think that a timeless supernatural creature created by god to serve god before man was even thought up is going to be making smiles at you when you die? i have thee odd feeling that these highly overated creatures have better things to do..like get our lord the fallen accusor saint lucifer back in the drivers seat where he/she belongs...and how come the devil gets to be elizabeth hurley and harvy kietel in the movies, but god has to be goerge burns and alanis morrisette...see..these are the serious questions you should be asking yourself. daily, if possible.n
Re: There is no end by INTRANSIT	12-Nov-02/11:57 AM
way better than yesterdays...what's today? 8.
Re: Handy Smurf by Bachus	12-Nov-02/10:43 AM
okay the plan...us real street savy deserving poets like d.a and z and the brazester and nentwined the wall buster and all of those others and babs and p&k and razora and... well fuckit even blade. we're gonna bomb than anthrax than anal cunt kick this guy SMichaels@poetry.com because he crawled out of my t.v last night and toe nailed my cocker spaniel. what the fuck is this cads problem...he will not fucking give up!FUCKING CHISEL CHESTED MARSHMALLOW FONDLER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and you can never e-mail the guy..he is apparently unreachably above us..he needs to die as soon as supernaturally possible..this is a job for the necronomican.
Re: IF Now! by feathers68	12-Nov-02/10:20 AM
what a mind fuck..JESUS! HA HA! unreal. not funny unreal...but kinda funny like a mouth full of shit. greatread...now in the dog bowl with you.
Re: a comment on IF Now! by feathers68	12-Nov-02/10:17 AM
nice recovery...i was about to say. what the fuck are you mumbling about, but you released you were mumbling too, and finished. well too . may i add. cheers
Re: a comment on An ode to my sugar daddy, but in haiku by horus8	12-Nov-02/10:02 AM
actually...good question. it's the hollywood shuffle! you see hollywood is controlled by the velvet maffia...especially now with ovtiz gone..barry diller and david geffen have the world by the balls, and obviously me along with it. perhaps you should catch up on reading the 'variety'(a snooty little fucked up paper that deals strictly with the entertainment field) a bit and get back with me later for another lesson...sorry for yelling earlier..it's just well...i'm fucked up emotionally these days and swinging at the fences...you know what i mean der.. ham nuts? carry on. fruitcake.
Re: a comment on An ode to my sugar daddy, but in haiku by horus8	12-Nov-02/9:52 AM
it's how you were conceived twit...what the fuck do you think it is? unless you're 10..then i apologies ("i'm sorry") for calling you a twit. twat. look it up in your boy/girl scout handbook...jesus christ!..the nerve.
Re: Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT	11-Nov-02/5:58 PM
i never scan.. i read than hop around naked going "fiji" "fiji"...i was interested straight through...it might just be heart singing barracuda in the background...that song always makes me smile though aint that the truth.9.
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	11-Nov-02/10:17 AM
once again lord caddington (the darkest angel alive) spins ballarina like 'pon his heel to deliver a crushing blow from his rhinestone encrusted pink gauntlet. 'grasshen' goes toppling end over end landing on a display of stanley tape measures near the return isle. no receipt, no return.(he called me your sycophant[yardtard]i've decided to make him my next project, i doubt that you mind...me moving off of you and onto him) pfff.
Re: a comment on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8	11-Nov-02/9:18 AM
Actually, neither. i'm the priest that can teach you latin, and give you a straight bowl haircut...i'm going to go smoke a joint now and have a cup of coffee.. when i get back..i'll tend to your insult in a more hands on fashion.. prepare.
Re: The Funnyman by Christof	10-Nov-02/11:43 PM
let me guess. jerry springer's inevitable future. quite a remarkably stimulating piece...not a ten inch vibrator with a nickname though, but here's a nine all the same.
Re: Familiarity by Rumidi	10-Nov-02/11:32 PM
gandi eat your heart out. then your spinach. 8.
Re: My Woman, My Lover, My Friend by -=SeTTle=-	10-Nov-02/11:25 PM
"my hearts like a butterfly with flowers to give" is reason enough for me to finally get up the nerve to write stephen king that letter about how his acting in creepshow changed my life. forever. oh..."loving juice fruit" wasn't shabby neither.