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IF Now! (Free verse) by feathers68 If now I am taken,
let me see your smiling face,
So the journey will be calm
and the last thing I see is
a smile made by angels.
If I am taken now,
May I arrive at my final destination
ready for adventure
and learning anew.
Up the ladder:
Killing spree
Down the ladder:
Just Die Already...
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Posted: November 12, 2002 5:42 AM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 5:42 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8319116 Overall Rank: 10819 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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12-Nov-02/9:33 AM
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this sounds like a scene from a film called the prophecy, its a nice poem, too prayerlike for me, it wouldnt be out of place in a salacious mood. I have a theory of Angels.....the sound of your heartbeat is really the flapping of angels wings and that your heart is broken it carries your soul unto heaven so you are reincarnated into a new host so you have another chance of finding truelove, they are our guardian angels, bastards of a God who condemned them for challenging fate, so when you see a feather fall, it is an angel falling from grace, and they rain their love down on you, you cant fell it soak you but it does, What do i know man i'm fucked up
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> Caducus
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12-Nov-02/10:17 AM
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nice recovery...i was about to say. what the fuck are you mumbling about, but you released you were mumbling too, and finished. well too . may i add. cheers
what a mind fuck..JESUS! HA HA! unreal. not funny unreal...but kinda funny like a mouth full of shit. greatread...now in the dog bowl with you.
I'm taking the innocent death road with this. Liked it
do you really think that a timeless supernatural creature created by god to serve god before man was even thought up is going to be making smiles at you when you die? i have thee odd feeling that these highly overated creatures have better things to do..like get our lord the fallen accusor saint lucifer back in the drivers seat where he/she belongs...and how come the devil gets to be elizabeth hurley and harvy kietel in the movies, but god has to be goerge burns and alanis morrisette...see..these are the serious questions you should be asking yourself. daily, if possible.n
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