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Just Die Already... (Haiku) by loneshadow29
blades of agony slicing through his tattered heart why won't you just die

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.375
Weighted score: 4.8319116
Overall Rank: 10820
Posted: November 21, 2002 11:32 AM PST; Last modified: November 21, 2002 11:37 AM PST
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[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Nov-02/12:33 PM | Reply
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 21-Nov-02/12:36 PM | Reply
You win.
[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 22-Nov-02/5:19 AM | Reply
Reminded me of Jason Vorhees, I appreciate violence after caffeine.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.16 | 23-Jan-03/1:43 PM | Reply
Ow! The angst! That hurt. I think blades of steel might cause agony. The seat of the soul is not in the heart. for the last time,it's in the left buttock. As for the last line, that's pretty much the advice I'm trying to give you, gothboy. Oh...don't cry. Here, have a kleenex, your eyeliner's running.
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