poemranker ::Just Die Already... by loneshadow29

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Haiku № 26314

Just Die Already...

by loneshadow29

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Nov 2002 · Edited 21 Nov 2002 · 4 comments

blades of agony slicing through his tattered heart why won't you just die

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[8] Bachus 21-Nov-02/12:33 PM Reply
you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 21-Nov-02/12:36 PM Reply
You win.
[7] Caducus 22-Nov-02/5:19 AM Reply
Reminded me of Jason Vorhees, I appreciate violence after caffeine.
[0] razorgrin 23-Jan-03/1:43 PM Reply
Ow! The angst! That hurt. I think blades of steel might cause agony. The seat of the soul is not in the heart. for the last time,it's in the left buttock. As for the last line, that's pretty much the advice I'm trying to give you, gothboy. Oh...don't cry. Here, have a kleenex, your eyeliner's running.