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Just Die Already... (Haiku) by loneshadow29 blades of agony
slicing through his tattered heart
why won't you just die
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Posted: November 21, 2002 11:32 AM PST; Last modified: November 21, 2002 11:37 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8319116 Overall Rank: 10826 Comments:
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
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21-Nov-02/12:33 PM
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you first. you know how i feel about you, but i'm going to be a big boy for a minute a rate this with no bye-ass 0. lol! naw just kidding here's an eight...because the titles cool and it's all around well done like my eggs benidect and fresh squeezed orange juice..you know it's 85 degrees right now in sunny california..slice of papaya? anyone? 8. mayne add a question mark with an exlamation POINT! for overall stamina down the stretch aye.r
You win.
Reminded me of Jason Vorhees, I appreciate violence after caffeine.
Ow! The angst! That hurt. I think blades of steel might cause agony. The seat of the soul is not in the heart. for the last time,it's in the left buttock. As for the last line, that's pretty much the advice I'm trying to give you, gothboy. Oh...don't cry. Here, have a kleenex, your eyeliner's running.
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