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IF Now! (Free verse) by feathers68

If now I am taken, let me see your smiling face, So the journey will be calm and the last thing I see is a smile made by angels. If I am taken now, May I arrive at my final destination ready for adventure and learning anew.

horus8 12-Nov-02/10:17 AM
nice recovery...i was about to say. what the fuck are you mumbling about, but you released you were mumbling too, and finished. well too . may i add. cheers




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