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IF Now! (Free verse) by feathers68

If now I am taken, let me see your smiling face, So the journey will be calm and the last thing I see is a smile made by angels. If I am taken now, May I arrive at my final destination ready for adventure and learning anew.

horus8 12-Nov-02/12:18 PM
do you really think that a timeless supernatural creature created by god to serve god before man was even thought up is going to be making smiles at you when you die? i have thee odd feeling that these highly overated creatures have better things to do..like get our lord the fallen accusor saint lucifer back in the drivers seat where he/she belongs...and how come the devil gets to be elizabeth hurley and harvy kietel in the movies, but god has to be goerge burns and alanis morrisette...see..these are the serious questions you should be asking yourself. daily, if possible.n




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