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IF Now! (Free verse) by feathers68

If now I am taken, let me see your smiling face, So the journey will be calm and the last thing I see is a smile made by angels. If I am taken now, May I arrive at my final destination ready for adventure and learning anew.

Caducus 12-Nov-02/9:33 AM
this sounds like a scene from a film called the prophecy, its a nice poem, too prayerlike for me, it wouldnt be out of place in a salacious mood. I have a theory of Angels.....the sound of your heartbeat is really the flapping of angels wings and that your heart is broken it carries your soul unto heaven so you are reincarnated into a new host so you have another chance of finding truelove, they are our guardian angels, bastards of a God who condemned them for challenging fate, so when you see a feather fall, it is an angel falling from grace, and they rain their love down on you, you cant fell it soak you but it does, What do i know man i'm fucked up




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