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There is no end

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Nov 2002 · Edited 12 Nov 2002 · 17 comments

The sky is being penetrated! The celestial body is being raped! Mankind is plunging its' machine into the womb of the universe and we are scattering our bad seed throughout the cosmos. Surely the offspring will fall upon us hauntingly, as we have not learned to amend the past.

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[n/a] <~> 11-Nov-02/5:55 PM Reply
hmmm, my bruises were never as pretty as pink (bless you for not knowing that???!) nor have i ever seen grey jis...as for the bad seed, yes, amen to that. but who what when where why...or at least how? i like to watch....even it if it's only on the ranker. you'll not get a vote from me until i get some salient details, sirrah!
[8] brazen 12-Nov-02/5:01 AM Reply
trust me, the offspring have return...as lawyers. they sued me for raping their mother the sky and now i can't get within 1000 feet of it or i'll be arrested.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › brazen 12-Nov-02/5:46 AM Reply
I've got one for those guys. In a few....
This is going to get tweaked, check back please. Thanks!
[8] horus8 12-Nov-02/11:57 AM Reply
way better than yesterdays...what's today? 8.
[n/a] <~> 12-Nov-02/12:01 PM Reply
yes, yes. true, but does not cut me to the quick, as the other does.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 12-Nov-02/12:38 PM Reply
This aint about love, or sex for that matter. I might leave it as is, lest I allow you to make me burst a capillary in my noggin. My matter hasn't ached in a while. thanks.
[n/a] <~> › INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/12:40 PM Reply
my matter aches all the time, sirrah.
[2] poetandknowit 12-Nov-02/2:23 PM Reply
Big bad universal themes written in big bad universal language just doesn't seem hunky dory. Do you read poems over the CB to all the other truckers? And after you are finished do you say 10-4?
[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 13-Nov-02/10:19 AM Reply
This is basic and not well hidden isn't it? No,I actually talk on the two way very little. And no, I usually finish with silence. Depending on what the topic happens to be. Go to your closest truck stop. I bet you can get a list of the 10-codes if you want it.
[2] poetandknowit › INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:26 AM Reply
I was driving my grandmother from Florida to Misery in August. There were four of us in two cars and I was the only one under 80. But anyway, we had a CB to communicate with one another. Old folks do that sort of thing. And I almost watched your brethren with 18 wheels take out my grandmother's 84-year-old sweetie a few times when he poked out into their lane stuck in cruise control. Anyway, on the CB we heard all sorts of rants, especially sexual, which made my granny and her gang blush. Was that you? Are you an OTR pervert? 10-4. buddy. I like the truck stops for the ice cream and porno booths.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 13-Nov-02/10:35 AM Reply
I really don't feel like being sucked to a lower level than I am capable of.
[2] poetandknowit › INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:47 AM Reply
What does that mean? You do not like truck stop ice cream? Or watching two people have sex when you are lonely on the road? Over and out.
[n/a] god'swife › poetandknowit 13-Nov-02/10:50 AM Reply
I like watching two people have sex, but porn is so unreal and ridiculous. I think I'll have ice cream for breakfast. I'll pour some coffee over it.
[2] poetandknowit › god'swife 13-Nov-02/10:55 AM Reply
In Barcelona, you can pay to watch two lovely people perform live on stage for you. It is quite a beautiful sort of thing. And stunningly arousing. I had to hurry back to the hotel room. Good thing it was only next door.

Ice cream at a truck stop tastes different than ice cream from a store, so it will not do.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-Nov-02/3:30 PM Reply
((gay -> AIDS) -> gay) -> gay

This completes the proof. 
[7] Caducus 13-Nov-02/3:47 AM Reply
That Hits !
[9] Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/12:11 PM Reply
grammatical fix: its machine- should not have an apostrophe there. Maybe drop the first exclamation point. Two in a row are too much and actually lessens the impact.
Nice!