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There is no end (Free verse) by INTRANSIT The sky is being penetrated!
The celestial body is being raped!
Mankind is plunging its' machine
into the womb of the universe
and we are scattering our bad seed
throughout the cosmos.
Surely the offspring will fall
upon us hauntingly,
as we have not learned to
amend the past.
Up the ladder:
Blonded by the Light
Down the ladder:
The Darkness Without You
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Posted: November 11, 2002 4:07 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 11:37 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0896473 Overall Rank: 6198 Comments:
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11-Nov-02/5:55 PM
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hmmm, my bruises were never as pretty as pink (bless you for not knowing that???!) nor have i ever seen grey jis...as for the bad seed, yes, amen to that. but who what when where why...or at least how? i like to watch....even it if it's only on the ranker. you'll not get a vote from me until i get some salient details, sirrah!
trust me, the offspring have return...as lawyers. they sued me for raping their mother the sky and now i can't get within 1000 feet of it or i'll be arrested.
I've got one for those guys. In a few....
This is going to get tweaked, check back please. Thanks!
way better than yesterdays...what's today? 8.
yes, yes. true, but does not cut me to the quick, as the other does.
This aint about love, or sex for that matter. I might leave it as is, lest I allow you to make me burst a capillary in my noggin. My matter hasn't ached in a while. thanks.
my matter aches all the time, sirrah.
Big bad universal themes written in big bad universal language just doesn't seem hunky dory. Do you read poems over the CB to all the other truckers? And after you are finished do you say 10-4?
This is basic and not well hidden isn't it? No,I actually talk on the two way very little. And no, I usually finish with silence. Depending on what the topic happens to be. Go to your closest truck stop. I bet you can get a list of the 10-codes if you want it.
I was driving my grandmother from Florida to Misery in August. There were four of us in two cars and I was the only one under 80. But anyway, we had a CB to communicate with one another. Old folks do that sort of thing. And I almost watched your brethren with 18 wheels take out my grandmother's 84-year-old sweetie a few times when he poked out into their lane stuck in cruise control. Anyway, on the CB we heard all sorts of rants, especially sexual, which made my granny and her gang blush. Was that you? Are you an OTR pervert? 10-4. buddy. I like the truck stops for the ice cream and porno booths.
I really don't feel like being sucked to a lower level than I am capable of.
What does that mean? You do not like truck stop ice cream? Or watching two people have sex when you are lonely on the road? Over and out.
I like watching two people have sex, but porn is so unreal and ridiculous. I think I'll have ice cream for breakfast. I'll pour some coffee over it.
In Barcelona, you can pay to watch two lovely people perform live on stage for you. It is quite a beautiful sort of thing. And stunningly arousing. I had to hurry back to the hotel room. Good thing it was only next door.
Ice cream at a truck stop tastes different than ice cream from a store, so it will not do.
((gay -> AIDS) -> gay) -> gay
This completes the proof.
That Hits !
grammatical fix: its machine- should not have an apostrophe there. Maybe drop the first exclamation point. Two in a row are too much and actually lessens the impact.
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