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The Darkness Without You (Free verse) by Bonehiss The sounds of the city
Invade my silent refuge,
Where I sit alone,
Alone with the memory
Of a finer day,
A day without clouds,
Without the knowledge
I'd soon be without you.
Alone with the sounds of the city,
Alone in the darkness without you.
Up the ladder:
There is no end
Down the ladder:
Afraid
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Posted: November 14, 2002 10:57 PM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2002 10:57 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0896473 Overall Rank: 6199 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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15-Nov-02/1:20 AM
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Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
nice!8
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