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The Darkness Without You (Free verse) by Bonehiss

The sounds of the city Invade my silent refuge, Where I sit alone, Alone with the memory Of a finer day, A day without clouds, Without the knowledge I'd soon be without you. Alone with the sounds of the city, Alone in the darkness without you.

Caducus 15-Nov-02/1:20 AM
Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh




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