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There is no end (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

The sky is being penetrated! The celestial body is being raped! Mankind is plunging its' machine into the womb of the universe and we are scattering our bad seed throughout the cosmos. Surely the offspring will fall upon us hauntingly, as we have not learned to amend the past.

Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/12:11 PM
grammatical fix: its machine- should not have an apostrophe there. Maybe drop the first exclamation point. Two in a row are too much and actually lessens the impact.
Nice!




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