poemranker ::25 mg by kiki

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Free verse № 23095

25 mg

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

Into it a long white winter hides, unlike your stomach ache. It is not hand or foot, shallowed and shelled, plastic melting. Will I see for myself that it holds my little balls tight, allowing no slippage or flight? A pair of swallows march my mind line after line, keeping pages sticky and sweet, drying my instincts gingerly, like a mother. Into it a thousand whispers tell me how to tie my shoe, not with gentle handshakes, not the way you walk two by three or two. I dare say I am different than the skinny girl and her pink pill??? I walk alone. And this is not food, and this is not body. Whispers eat themselves, and they are the dessert of my orders.

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[7] -=SeTTle=- 29-Oct-02/8:46 PM Reply
Adderal is a pink dextroamphetamine that makes you skinny and very intelligent - it also makes your mouth dry. I don't think that's what you're talking about.
[n/a] kiki › -=SeTTle=- 30-Oct-02/4:18 PM Reply
First of all, adderal does not by any means make you intelligent...it helps you concentrate. I am well acquainted with the drug. And I suppose, to some extent, yes, that was what i was talking about..in saying "I am not like the skinny girl and her pink pill." The rest of the poem, if you must know, is about topamax...a recently developed mood stabilizer for people with bi-polar disorder.
[7] -=SeTTle=- 30-Oct-02/5:15 PM Reply
When mental energy is concentrated, intelligence is increased. For all intents and purposes, it makes you more intelligent. You will get better grades if you take this drug. People will find you clever.
[n/a] kiki › -=SeTTle=- 31-Oct-02/2:15 PM Reply
you're an idiot.
[10] horus8 30-Oct-02/5:20 PM Reply
well..well.quite the forester are we? here's wishing you luck with your nuts and berries of the future 10. lean is mean!