poemranker ::Some asshole with a shit band. by Plasticgirlwithgun

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Some asshole with a shit band.

by Plasticgirlwithgun

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Dec 2002 · 6 comments

Your love is passe And you .. You're just brainless Lost in your own little daze In your own little world. Now I know that you were just phase Nothing in this big cold un-welcoming world Just a little boy who is going bald at sixteen.

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6 comments

[9] Bachus 12-Dec-02/3:24 PM Reply
"running around robbing banks all whacked out on scoobie snacks" [fun loving criminals] this is really an admirable piece, unless it's about the cads,than it's admonishable.
[n/a] flatliner 12-Dec-02/3:25 PM Reply
how about tell IT like it is.
[9] Bachus › flatliner 12-Dec-02/3:28 PM Reply
It? the horrible balding, the poem, or the scoobie doobie?n
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › flatliner 12-Dec-02/7:48 PM Reply
I did.
[6] Caducus 13-Dec-02/2:20 AM Reply
Deliciously evil and bitchy, shoot me in slow mo plasticgirl
[9] razorgrin 13-Dec-02/11:36 AM Reply
Best bitchiness I've heard in a while. fun lovin' criminals are delightful.