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Some asshole with a shit band. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun
Your love is passe And you .. You're just brainless Lost in your own little daze In your own little world. Now I know that you were just phase Nothing in this big cold un-welcoming world Just a little boy who is going bald at sixteen.

Up the ladder: 25 mg
Down the ladder: Home Sweet Home

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3333335
Overall Rank: 3489
Posted: December 12, 2002 2:47 PM PST; Last modified: December 12, 2002 2:47 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Dec-02/3:24 PM | Reply
"running around robbing banks all whacked out on scoobie snacks" [fun loving criminals] this is really an admirable piece, unless it's about the cads,than it's admonishable.
[n/a] flatliner @ 64.175.99.26 | 12-Dec-02/3:25 PM | Reply
how about tell IT like it is.
[9] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > flatliner | 12-Dec-02/3:28 PM | Reply
It? the horrible balding, the poem, or the scoobie doobie?n
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun @ 152.163.189.171 > flatliner | 12-Dec-02/7:48 PM | Reply
I did.
[6] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 13-Dec-02/2:20 AM | Reply
Deliciously evil and bitchy, shoot me in slow mo plasticgirl
[9] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.12 | 13-Dec-02/11:36 AM | Reply
Best bitchiness I've heard in a while. fun lovin' criminals are delightful.
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