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Some asshole with a shit band. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun

Your love is passe And you .. You're just brainless Lost in your own little daze In your own little world. Now I know that you were just phase Nothing in this big cold un-welcoming world Just a little boy who is going bald at sixteen.

Bachus 12-Dec-02/3:24 PM
"running around robbing banks all whacked out on scoobie snacks" [fun loving criminals] this is really an admirable piece, unless it's about the cads,than it's admonishable.




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