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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: Good Love (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~wfor appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! what makes a good love
does it come from above
or from within
when love is just a
reflection of what we see
in the me
barry
snow
white
giggles at the
innocent moment.
the lucky ones
get the best
moments.
I am going home
alone
to find my
lovely one.
:)
Up the ladder:
Judgment
Down the ladder:
A lighthouse
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Posted: October 24, 2002 10:03 PM PDT; Last modified: October 24, 2002 10:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.5517645 Overall Rank: 12685 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.117.82
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25-Oct-02/1:19 PM
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the movie don juan with brando and depp gives a great definition of love,,try that
Off with your head! Cheap tramp, rhyming love with above, is crime in these here parts. Get out of town Foxy Brown. "The lucky ones...' deserves better then that stalest of intros. Go away and come back when your ready. On your marks. Get set...
A stolen poem? Does it make the body good? Hours8 is one to critic the others but remember all he is friends with a plagiarist, which next to Robot Cheney is the lowest of all human life forms. You and GW should be ashamed of yourselves to let this continue. Thank you for letting your California friends fuck up yet another place.
Please enlighten me as to way this is a reply to my comment. Is this poem plagiarised? What friend of Horus8? I'm completely in the dark on this one.
i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4
no. to find your wooden shoes a haven for tasteless termites.
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