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Rain Doesn't Seem to Stop (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul For two months now
It hasnt stop
The neverending rainfall
The floods have begun to run ravagedly
Like mad man who have been released from seclusion
I can only put my head above the countless inches that plan
to take my very essence
The rain which started so long ago has made us all forget
when it started
When will this end!!
When will we be forgived for whatever wrong we have committed
I slowly start to fall below and wonder has this tradegy happened
because of my non-faith
Up the ladder:
Funny Thought
Down the ladder:
survival of the weakest
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Posted: October 25, 2002 11:01 AM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2002 11:01 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.8319116 Overall Rank: 10820 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.117.82
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26-Oct-02/8:35 AM
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alright noah...but can you side stroke the suez canal?
This poem definitely is a tradegy. A great tradegy.
My thoughtful friend we are now aquatic mammals! Our brand of debauchery is despised from here to there. The change starts with you, and it (unfortunately or not for us), ends there as well.
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