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survival of the weakest (Free verse) by brazen
desperately hanging onto what remains
but a shallow grave floods quickly
sinking captain with your ship
why try to survive, you're sickly?
broke all the pieces left to breathe
forgot about the pounding heart
just another muscle to pull, to stretch
lost the lust of libido
just another organ to donate, to share
how could you confuse the two
why try to survive, you're not one to care?
alone becomes a frightening word
only when you use it more then once
before then it is a welcomed change
to dying for a life thats beyond itself
why try to survive...
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.375
Weighted score: 4.8319116
Overall Rank: 10819
Posted: October 28, 2002 6:53 AM PST; Last modified: October 28, 2002 6:53 AM PST
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