Alien

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Nov 2002 · 3 comments

this planet is a beautifull place but when the night comes when i see the moon,and the stars i feel lost in this world there's no other star that's my twin i'm an alien in this world of nothingness i'm from another planet of which i like to call "stanza" i'm stock here on Earth a totally new universe i wanna go back home instead of writing this poem coz i'm a stranger among ppl i'm an alien me and this planet,we never mesh this air i breath,it's not the same and this food i eat it's weird it's a planet of no name but it's where i belong it's where i feel strong and where i can right all the wrongs i'm waiting in the dark for my ship to start

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[4] Nicholas Jones 3-Nov-02/4:34 AM Reply

Read 'A Martian Sends a Postcard Home' by Craig Raine. He did it better. And first.

[2] <~> 4-Nov-02/11:19 AM Reply

if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.

you don't.

[0] Tintagiles 5-Nov-02/11:39 AM Reply

You're 'stock on earth'? Yum. Are you better with noodles or with rice?