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Alien (Free verse) by Mutant_X
this planet is a beautifull place but when the night comes when i see the moon,and the stars i feel lost in this world there's no other star that's my twin i'm an alien in this world of nothingness i'm from another planet of which i like to call "stanza" i'm stock here on Earth a totally new universe i wanna go back home instead of writing this poem coz i'm a stranger among ppl i'm an alien me and this planet,we never mesh this air i breath,it's not the same and this food i eat it's weird it's a planet of no name but it's where i belong it's where i feel strong and where i can right all the wrongs i'm waiting in the dark for my ship to start

Up the ladder: survival of the weakest
Down the ladder: when i had a fit

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.375
Weighted score: 4.8319116
Overall Rank: 10816
Posted: November 3, 2002 4:32 AM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2002 4:32 AM PST
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Comments:
[4] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 3-Nov-02/4:34 AM | Reply
Read 'A Martian Sends a Postcard Home' by Craig Raine. He did it better. And first.
[2] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 4-Nov-02/11:19 AM | Reply
if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.

you don't.
[0] Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.88 | 5-Nov-02/11:39 AM | Reply
You're 'stock on earth'? Yum. Are you better with noodles or with rice?
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