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Alien (Free verse) by Mutant_X
this planet is a beautifull place
but when the night comes
when i see the moon,and the stars
i feel lost in this world
there's no other star
that's my twin
i'm an alien
in this world of nothingness
i'm from another planet
of which i like to call
"stanza"
i'm stock here on Earth
a totally new universe
i wanna go back home
instead of writing this poem
coz i'm a stranger
among ppl i'm an alien
me and this planet,we never mesh
this air i breath,it's not the same
and this food i eat
it's weird
it's a planet of no name
but it's where i belong
it's where i feel strong
and where i can right all the wrongs
i'm waiting in the dark
for my ship to start
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Weighted score: 4.8319116
Overall Rank: 10822
Posted: November 3, 2002 4:32 AM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2002 4:32 AM PST
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