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Alien (Free verse) by Mutant_X

this planet is a beautifull place but when the night comes when i see the moon,and the stars i feel lost in this world there's no other star that's my twin i'm an alien in this world of nothingness i'm from another planet of which i like to call "stanza" i'm stock here on Earth a totally new universe i wanna go back home instead of writing this poem coz i'm a stranger among ppl i'm an alien me and this planet,we never mesh this air i breath,it's not the same and this food i eat it's weird it's a planet of no name but it's where i belong it's where i feel strong and where i can right all the wrongs i'm waiting in the dark for my ship to start

<~> 4-Nov-02/11:19 AM
if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.

you don't.




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