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survival of the weakest (Free verse) by brazen

desperately hanging onto what remains but a shallow grave floods quickly sinking captain with your ship why try to survive, you're sickly? broke all the pieces left to breathe forgot about the pounding heart just another muscle to pull, to stretch lost the lust of libido just another organ to donate, to share how could you confuse the two why try to survive, you're not one to care? alone becomes a frightening word only when you use it more then once before then it is a welcomed change to dying for a life thats beyond itself why try to survive...

Bachus 28-Oct-02/10:31 AM
What? i suppose the reverse couldn't be argued either? you sir have od in willy wonka's chocolate factory and the oompa loompas gang raped you on the marshmallow bank of the butterscotch river...here's to the trials of life! 10!-9+5= my middle finger! 6.




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