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20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (1721-1740) and replies

Re: His Mother's Son by vulcan 15-Nov-02/2:20 PM
Wow, great tug of emotional war here. I can't imagine what women go through.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit 15-Nov-02/7:33 AM
For some reason,"alluvial" doesn't seem to fit. sounds like a brief geology lesson. I dunno.
Re: My love for another. by cleverdevice 15-Nov-02/6:05 AM
Great quality of content. If you can, tweak this to Nicholas' suggestions. I'd like to learn how to do this and this could be a good example. thanks
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus 14-Nov-02/4:05 PM
I keep reading this and I think it deserves exaltation beyond p/r.
Re: The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus 14-Nov-02/4:00 PM
I'm on the posi-side here. And another vote for (derelict peace). I want to write something like this for my mom, I'm just not ready yet. Fab read indeed.
Re: No recalculations needed by Bachus 13-Nov-02/2:42 PM
Personally, I recieved this well. It felt balanced.8 plus an imaginary 1/2
Re: a comment on Today by INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:46 AM
Sorry, it seemed like a loaded question. No hard feelings?
Re: a comment on Today by INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:43 AM
Imagine you happen to be depressed and that it happens to be raining. You follow the drops down the glass with your finger.At that point you are depression itself,But there's still the awareness that you don't have to be that way if you don't choose to. The copied line really doesn't matter, to me.
Re: a comment on There is no end by INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:35 AM
I really don't feel like being sucked to a lower level than I am capable of.
Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird 13-Nov-02/10:26 AM
Some days I wish it would shower us with it's envious love.
Re: a comment on Today by INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:24 AM
so you think it's that bad that I should pull it?
Re: a comment on There is no end by INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:19 AM
This is basic and not well hidden isn't it? No,I actually talk on the two way very little. And no, I usually finish with silence. Depending on what the topic happens to be. Go to your closest truck stop. I bet you can get a list of the 10-codes if you want it.
Re: more than i bargained for by Limness 12-Nov-02/7:12 PM
Fast and furious. good stuff, maynard.
Re: a comment on Hve you ever..... v2 by INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/12:41 PM
Soooooo, returning was just a practice run huh? Now the work really begins. I feel you leering over my shouder, but I asked for it. hooooboy.
Re: a comment on There is no end by INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/12:38 PM
This aint about love, or sex for that matter. I might leave it as is, lest I allow you to make me burst a capillary in my noggin. My matter hasn't ached in a while. thanks.
Re: a comment on Returning by INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/12:02 PM
Hopefully the time I spent reworking this (with zzinnias help) was worth it. Thank you all. And TINTAGILES, sorry about getting snubby there. I read your profile and became insecure for a moment . I gotta stop doin' that! Thanks!
Re: IF Now! by feathers68 12-Nov-02/11:28 AM
I'm taking the innocent death road with this. Liked it
Re: a comment on There is no end by INTRANSIT 12-Nov-02/5:46 AM
I've got one for those guys. In a few....
This is going to get tweaked, check back please. Thanks!
Re: Goodbye by Nicholas Jones 11-Nov-02/3:37 PM
I'll come back to this a couple of times before I number it.
Re: Shwe Nat by shwenatjadeflower 10-Nov-02/6:24 PM
Now I have a reason to put some effot into my dragon. A battle is sure to ensue.


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