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His Mother's Son (Free verse) by vulcan
This shattered spirit's atrocious desire To crouch in cloisters'corner in Satan's erotic attire To kill a million people,preach God's prayer And pinch the baby's defenceless dangling dimples This madness towards ruining the bare skin This savage pose of grasping the chaotic dagger keen This harrowing hatred towards their physical voice When they read Shakespeare with their famous reason, It's Life understood by man in his most desperate hour When he embraces her but in the name of Love and knows gnashing his teeth tamely together He is Hers His Mother's Son forever.

Up the ladder: Winter Rose
Down the ladder: The mechanics of love

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6522
Posted: November 15, 2002 10:55 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2002 12:58 AM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 15-Nov-02/2:20 PM | Reply
Wow, great tug of emotional war here. I can't imagine what women go through.
[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Nov-02/5:02 PM | Reply
well. well. you got me. here's your prize. bastard. GOLDEN QUE TIP AWARD NUMBER 37 FOR MR. HEPHAESTUS AND HIS PEN'S POISED CHARM. this piece is a crack through..a matrix reveiler...an f5 twister....here's your 10...i'm late again...for mother..dear grendal and sir oedipus (my costumes please..thank you) i will focus perhaps a bit more of my energies in a more positive and costructive fashion, but not now...maybe...tomorrow.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180 | 20-Nov-02/5:33 AM | Reply
shattered, atrocious, erotic, defenceless, dangling, bare, savage, chaotic, gay, harrowing, physical, famous, desperate, too, many, fucking, adjectives, asswipe.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 20-Nov-02/10:15 AM | Reply
i can't believe you said "too many adjectives" that goes five clicks beyond ironic.
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