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more than i bargained for (Free verse) by Limness
finite bright finish pound drown diminish sound out deliberately sow slow compassionately but where is the emotion? bought blight done fought fight won are we having fun? forged, gorged, and roar armchair, blanket, snore sundays i'm ignored unless i block the score what am i, your whore?

Up the ladder: Tiger
Down the ladder: tomorrow

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10316
Posted: November 12, 2002 1:09 PM PST; Last modified: November 12, 2002 1:09 PM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 12-Nov-02/7:12 PM | Reply
Fast and furious. good stuff, maynard.
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