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tomorrow

Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Dec 2002 · 5 comments

if tomorrow is tomorrow why isnt it tomorrow tomorrow and if tomorrow becomes today and the next day becomes tommorow then what happens to yesterday when tommorrow becomes today

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[10] deleted user 5-Dec-02/4:57 AM Reply

Umm...yesterday is today???Or maybe not....does this really make sense???

[7] Caducus 5-Dec-02/5:07 AM Reply

Tomorrow Tomorrow I love ya, tomorrow its only a day away

(Annie loves it )

[n/a] deano › Caducus 6-Dec-02/1:20 AM Reply

who is annie??

[0] Bobjim 8-Jan-03/3:17 AM Reply

If tomorrow is tomorrow, it is tomorrow tomorrow, dumbass. Yesterday becomes the day before yesterday. To summerise: Shut up and never write again, fuckwit. 0 for being so dumb.

[7] nentwined 4-Oct-06/11:13 AM Reply

Fun, and my sort of fun, to boot. Simple, but overall the cadence is right, and the sounds as well. I don't like "why isn't it tomorrow tomorrow"--that doesn't flow right. Hmm. Yeah, could use some tweaking. But I think it's worth it.