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Suicidal thoughts

Member since 2003 · Posted 23 Feb 2003 · Edited 23 Feb 2003 · 13 comments

Deep in anger My life, it withers I sit alone Pacing the knife Up and down in strokes I watch the blood flow To the ground below Evil racing in my mind I leave this world behind The body grows so cold The only thing I c Is no one else but me I leave... My body behind In this world I had lost my mind Through the dark and dreary I'm the only one I truly fear

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[8] hipster flare 24-Feb-03/6:07 AM Reply

Don't do it. You need to stick around to write more poetry.

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › hipster flare 24-Feb-03/9:51 AM Reply

Thx 4 the votes. Well when i did this poem i did feel like hurting sumthin, i had a knife right next to me so it sparked the idea, * gets hit by a flying thorn bush*.....ow......

[2] razorgrin 24-Feb-03/7:00 AM Reply

Suicide is a very personal decision. If ou have thought it through and feel it is the only viable option, you should go through with it.

[n/a] Robert K Foster › razorgrin 24-Feb-03/8:39 AM Reply

What a twisted thing to say. I hope you didn't mean that. It goes against the laws of nature.

[2] razorgrin › Robert K Foster 24-Feb-03/9:32 AM Reply

Actually, I hold the right to choose how one lives and dies to be one of the most essential rights humans need. As for the laws of nature, most of what people do go against them.

[9] Ray 24-Feb-03/9:23 AM Reply

The crazlady....i really like this poem! keep writing

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › Ray 24-Feb-03/9:25 AM Reply

*bows* I thank ye for yr kindness.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Feb-03/12:15 PM Reply

Why not listen to -=Dark_Angel=- MP3 Corner #1?!?!? I'm sure it will cheer you up!!!!

http://www.angelfire.com/journal/thwarted/bumski.html

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/4:02 PM Reply

yes, i agree, suicide is perfect for you.

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › <{Baba^Yaga}> 24-Feb-03/7:15 PM Reply

YES I SHALL TELL ALL KINDERGARTENERS YR WISDOM! KILL YRSELVES AND 4EVER U SHALL BE FREEEEEE!!!!!!!! * cough* woops..... um..........yea..

[2] razorgrin › CrAzYlAdY Surukain 25-Feb-03/1:47 PM Reply

nyet. WE'LL be free. that's the point we make. Less people= more happy.

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › razorgrin 26-Feb-03/2:01 PM Reply

* gets atacked by an evil flying thorn bush* GAHHHHH!!!!
* later*
Wut did that hafta do with nething?.............
EXACTLY! NUTHIN! * laughs* im sooo bored....must pass yr wonderful message to all the kindergarteners.......they shall free ME of their stupidity!! MWUAAH! j/k.........gawd im so fuckin bored........I know! Ill go hang myself! BYE!

[n/a] CrAzYlAdY Surukain › razorgrin 26-Feb-03/2:03 PM Reply

P.S: I didnt put quotes, it was a message for kindergarteners if they killed themselves they would 4ever be free! but.....i hate goin near lil kids so thas out of the question.